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How to Write Marketing Emails That Actually Get Opened (and Improve Over Time)

Written by Ethan Vann | May 15, 2026 4:50:12 PM

Writing marketing emails can feel intimidating at first. There is pressure to write something creative enough to stand out while also getting people to actually click. But what I have learned is that effective email marketing is less about guessing and more about following a consistent process backed by data.

Instead of relying purely on instinct, marketers can use performance analytics, testing, and AI-powered tools to refine emails over time. In this blog, I will walk through the strategies and tools that help improve email open rates and make the process more intentional.

One of the biggest factors in email marketing success is the open rate. Before clicks or conversions can happen, the email first has to capture attention in the inbox.

Open rate reflects how effective your subject line is, how relevant your message feels, and how well you understand your audience. Improving open rates is important because it determines whether the rest of the email even gets seen.

What Actually Gets an Email Opened

From a writing standpoint, getting someone to open an email usually comes down to a few key elements. Subject lines that are shorter, more personal, or that create some level of curiosity or emotion tend to perform better.

Even small details like preview text or when you send the email can make a difference. But one thing I have realized is that even when you follow these general guidelines, there is still a level of unpredictability. That is because what works best is not just about writing, it is about testing and refining over time.

The Mistake Most People Make

A common mistake is relying too much on instinct. It is easy to assume you know what your audience will respond to, send the email, and move on without really analyzing the results.

I have definitely done this before, focusing more on getting the email out than learning from it afterward. The problem is that without looking at performance, you miss out on patterns that could help you improve. Writing is only one part of the process. The real improvement comes from understanding what worked and what did not, and then adjusting from there.

That is where tools like HubSpot come in. Platforms like HubSpot now use AI-powered features to help marketers analyze campaign performance more effectively. These tools can recommend subject line improvements, predict engagement rates, suggest send-time optimization, and summarize campaign performance trends automatically.

This makes it easier to understand not only how an email performed, but why it performed that way and what adjustments may improve future campaigns.

One of the most useful AI-supported features is predictive engagement testing. This allows marketers to compare subject line variations and estimate how different versions may perform before sending the email.

Instead of relying entirely on trial and error, marketers can make informed adjustments ahead of time. For open rates, where small wording changes can significantly affect performance, this creates a more intentional and data-driven process.

What Research Says About Subject Lines

Academic research also supports the importance of subject line optimization. In the 2021 study The Effect of Subject Lines on Open Rates of Email Marketing Messages by Snežana Stupar Rutenfrans and researchers at University College Roosevelt, researchers analyzed how different subject line strategies affected email open rates across more than 1.4 million recipients.

In the study, recipients from an email campaign were split into groups that each received a different type of subject line, including personalized, emotion-based, and shorter variations, along with a control version without those elements.

The results showed that every subject line with a distinct copywriting feature outperformed the control group. The control group had an open rate of 24.3 percent, while the personalized subject line reached 25.0 percent, the emotion-based version reached 26.1 percent, and the shorter subject line performed best at 26.9 percent.

What is important here is that these improvements came from relatively small changes. The study concluded that personalization, emotional language, and shorter subject lines can independently improve email open rates.

Industry benchmark research supports similar conclusions. According to Mailchimp’s email marketing benchmarks, subject line relevance and audience segmentation consistently influence open rate performance across industries. This reinforces the idea that successful email marketing depends less on sending more emails and more on sending more targeted and intentional ones.

Small Improvements, Big Results

Effective email marketing is rarely the result of one perfect subject line or campaign. More often, success comes from consistently testing small changes, analyzing performance, and refining your approach over time.

Research shows that even slight adjustments to wording, personalization, or email structure can improve open rates. Combined with modern analytics and AI-powered tools, marketers now have more ways than ever to understand audience behavior and make smarter decisions before hitting send.

The process may seem complicated from the outside, but in practice, strong email marketing is usually built through repetition, testing, and gradual improvement rather than guesswork alone.